Review/Grading

Review:
Medina Store. is a nice place for shopping, and I recommend your efforts to visit the store. As a student living in the hostel, you didn't need to go to the town leaving the school premises for shopping because I can see that Medina Store, sells a lot of items.

Being friendly to customers makes customers feel happy when shopping and gives them confidence in the items in the shop. Please take note, whenever there's a full stop (.) you should give a space, and also don't allow your write-ups to be too lengthy break them down.