Somehow as I start reading it made me feel sad. She must have an immense energy to keep working on that house while suffering from allergies. In a way the story ses to have a happy end with all the thoughtful repairements het father realised, still the story feels sad. Noatter how perfect it is, there's a huge missing...
I’m so glad you felt that. It’s amazing that you sensed there was more to the story. I’ve actually been drafting several different segments for this piece, waiting for the right time to post them. It’s my first time trying this writing style, so I’ve been pouring a lot of research and study into it. I wonder if you sensed that because you figured me out or there's something in the story that made you feel that way.