The Bridge Moves
There was this specificity in the way you described her in your piece. And I feel like it's something you cannot fake. When I was reading her piece, you were talking about the ocean of her sound, the dew of your misery melting at her smile.
I could get the words. You know, I feel like those details are too precise to be invented. Like, feel your feelings.
Like you were fully present. That is what I mean. I'm not asking you to see it from my perspective.
But as someone who doesn't believe in love, who is always watching it from a safe analytical distance, when these descriptions are being made, I think it kind of means something to me. I'm reading about the longing. I'm reading about all that transformation that happened because you decided to care about her.
Like, I can feel that. That is what I'm asking when I say describe. I'm not asking you to describe my point of view about love.
I just want you to describe what your giggling queen is all about. You know? But then, I get what you guys are always saying. These are the problems of love.
Yeah. But then, it was a very wonderful piece. I think I was actually creating an imagery of her.
You know? Even beautifying how she actually looks like. Yeah. And I love the way the point of view builds to the end.
Yeah, what's the reason? Tell me. You are beautifying how she looks so much Well, that's a title. But I did say something I said earlier.
The way you speak, like from your speech, the way you feel, how can you listen and describe a person to be in that mental state of engagement with a person? Because you already described somebody. You know, you have words for it. But even if those words haven't worked for you, it's still complicated to bring somebody else into that state, to your writing.
For those of you who make it much, much better, you need to write like, it's almost like asking them to write after excuses, like, oh, this is exactly how I was when we were engaged, of course, mentally. This is how it felt. This is this.
This is this. The bridge moves. Lightning strikes.
