The Boat Has An Engine
They're supposed to be in conflict in my own thoughts, but then you are putting them together in harmony, which I'm wondering if they have aimed that harmony. But then it goes on to the second stanza when you were talking about, with my soul drawn to the melody of my boat, to its gentle calm, I remember the days of purity, the angry sea and my restless self. And I was wondering, I know it's a rarity, but the boat has a melody.
Why doesn't the boat has an engine noise or a creak or something? But then I realized that that could be the boat's melody. You know, you're listening to it the way someone listens to music or something. I'm trying to unlock the thematic essence of your piece, because it's a very, I don't know, it's a very deep piece for me.
Yeah. And you were also talking about the angry sea and my restless self. You have a lot of things that you're using, which in my own word, shouldn't be in harmony.
